College Essay Critique: Intellectual Curiosity and Leadership

We’re back with another essay review! 🎓 Today’s Common App essay explores a student’s passion for politics and big ideas, and her journey toward becoming a more thoughtful, collaborative leader. We’re sharing what we liked, what stood out, and where there’s room for improvement, including how to show genuine growth and balance confidence with humility. Interested in more live essay review episodes? Let us know in the comments! 👇 #CollegeAdmissions #CollegeEssays #CollegeApplication #EssayTips #CollegeEssayTips