Suno Experiment #1 -Feedback Welcome

Hello YouTube! 👋 I’ve been dabbling with Suno and experimenting with AI music, and I’m having a lot of fun learning along the way. Despite the terrible lyrics I keep writing 😂, I’d love to hear from anyone who has experience with music, songwriting, production, or creative work in general. If you have any advice on how I could improve my music creatively, I’d genuinely appreciate it. I’m still experimenting and figuring things out, so constructive feedback is very welcome! Thanks for listening! 🤘 Terrible Lyrics (Mid-tempo, heavy driving beat) Every day, waking to the same fate Living life in a pointless state A walking, broken part of me Sensory’s gone dark again I just want... TO FEEL AGAIN! [Pre-Chorus] (Building tension, fast double-bass) [Shout] FEEL! I need the fire burning through the dark [Scream] BLEED! My life is slowly slipping away I want to know the reason why (Spoken, slow, deliberate, isolated) Life... feels... so... numb. [Chorus] (Explosive tempo, fast riff) Take a razor across my thumb... Just for the thrill! Taste the iron on my tongue— [High Scream] FEEL! [Verse 2] (Aggressive chugs, fast delivery) Sick relief in self-decay Nothing gained, just washed away Built to die, beyond repair Too far gone to even care [Bridge Setup] (Instrumental drop, clean/raspy solitary vocal) I need to feel the fire breaking through… [Bridge / Build-Up] (Building tempo, rising drums) Life continues to slowly fade Let the fire burn beneath it all [Outro / Heavy Breakdown] (Slow, down-tuned breakdown beat) [Low Growl] BLEED! Ash and smoke where I have been [Mid Scream] FEEL! Dig the embers deep within [High Scream / Layered] FEEL ME! As everything fades away... [Climax / Final Drop] (Music cuts out briefly) [Unhinged Scream] BLEED! Just to feel again— (Pause) Pain is the only proof that I'm... (Full band explosion) ALIVE!