How I Became Immortal on the Crownfall SMP

I tried my best on this one video, so please tell me what I have to change so in the future my videos will be even better! Crownfall SMP discord(link can't expire anymore)   / discord   Crownfall SMP Youtubers: ‪@Kryx_Minecraft‬ @DangerCraft-n6z Music Credits Suspence — NastelBomMusic by NastelBomLicense information: https://nastelbom.gumroad.com/l/jvwcd Boss Fight — Alexander NakaradaMusic by Alexander NakaradaWebsite: https://creatorchords.comLicensed under Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International (CC BY 4.0)https://creativecommons.org/licenses/... The Cold Battle — Alexander NakaradaMusic by Alexander NakaradaWebsite: https://creatorchords.comLicensed under Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International (CC BY 4.0)https://creativecommons.org/licenses/... Hot Pursuit — Kevin MacLeodMusic by Kevin MacLeodWebsite: https://incompetech.comLicensed under Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International (CC BY 4.0)https://creativecommons.org/licenses/... Clash Defiant — Kevin MacLeodMusic by Kevin MacLeodWebsite: https://incompetech.comLicensed under Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International (CC BY 4.0)https://creativecommons.org/licenses/... Additional Music — N91music (Free Adventure Music Pack)Music by N91musicMusic pack: https://n91music.itch.io/free-adventu... used: Hollow4, Hollow2, Hollow6, Hollow11Licensed under Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International (CC BY 4.0)https://creativecommons.org/licenses/... Minecraft Music — Lena Raine and C418Music composed by Lena Raine and C418 for Minecraft.Minecraft is developed by Mojang Studios.Official Minecraft music usage guidelines: https://help.minecraft.net/hc/en-us/a... Oh my GAHHHHH #minecraft #smp #smpstory #viral