Roblox, After the flash: Wintertide, what went wrong with the story?

Hey guys! I know its been forever but a lot has happened in my life and on top I lost interest in Wintertide. As result there are a couple unfinished videos that have been left to collect dust. But now I'm starting to get into atf 9 and I've got more free time so I've decided to lock in and push through finishing my last Wintertide videos. This one is about a year and a half late but I think still holds true with just a few tweaks made. But let me know what you think about it and yeah I'll see yall around.