heartbroken girldogthing (wip) - kayso789

I feel like it'll take me quite a bit to finish this song and leave it in a state where I don't think it deserves the wip mark, but I do want to atleast show off what I've made before then cause by the time the song is truly finished its topic won't really be relevant to me. This song also is not meant as any sort of callout to anybody, its a vent song more than anything bandcamp: https://kayso789.bandcamp.com/track/h... Lyrics cause I planned to sing those (They're represented in song by the triangle ooh-y wave that usually plays the lead melody) (also I added some notes for clarity): Intro (Humming) As I live each day. White space, empty face, all gray Wanting warmth, a safe space I could lay Almost no one whom with I could stay Verse 1 - I loved him now I'll never have someone to love Talked to him now I'll never have someone to talk to, He said I was musical. musical. Hurting me. Hurting me. this was hurting me so much I could not Cry it out. All my tears were only shown to him Unsafe, now. Safe space gone and it was all of him Does he know? How much all of this was hurting me? Hurting me. Hurting me. Hopefully the people I know help me Bridge - Why would Would He Leave me Early Loved me Morning Loved not Evening \\This next part doesn't match with whats sung but I didn't feel like sync-ing with the thing by cutting some words off yet Talked to, His Close friend, Much Asked ab-out Answers, vague Distant, to All of, us But not, him Why not, him? Chorus - Hey, lets go for the mourning guy Mourning guy, don't it feel ni-ice How the group you called a second home Has turned towards you and cried false Hey, lets go for the grieving gal Grieving gal, won't you be a pal and run away, turn your face that way while we laugh at your own tries Heartbroken? No, surely not! Surely they just wanna hurt us lo-ot All these words meant what I thought Not how she fought for what she sought Comfort? Nope, she just used you Used you for all your attention No matter how much she cared for All your lies and lives Verse 2 - \\This part was gonna be faster than the first verse and have a lot more references to things Whatever the fuck this part is - \\Giant ass fucking vent Chorus - Hey, lets go for the mourning guy Mourning guy, don't it feel ni-ice How the group you called a second home Has turned towards you and cried false Hey, lets go for the grieving gal Grieving gal, won't you be a pal and run away, turn your face that way while we laugh at your own tries Heartbroken? No, surely not! Surely they just wanna hurt us lo-ot All these words meant what I thought Not how she fought for what she sought Comfort? Nope, she just used you Used you for all your attention No matter how much she cared for All your lies and lives H E A R T B R O K E N H E A R T B R O K E N \\Evil ass morse code