To the Sky- A Fullmetal AMV

this is my first AMV ive ever made, its not done yet (and ill replace it with a finished copy when i do finish) sorry for the non 1080p quility, i had to work with what i had, PLEASE GIVE ME BRUTALLY HONEST FEEDBACK, what did you like, what did you not like, what needs to be changed (i for sure noticed a couple places that needs tweaking) what did you think of it song- owl city "to the sky"