Replay review - BingBaneBong ZvP 4:30 carrier rush?! 3K MMR

I am reviewing a replay today as my first video of a player hitting 3k and hitting it hard vs some insane cheese on the ladder like this 1 adept into CARRIER. Please let me know how I did, yeah the camera quality sucks, it's a 20 year old webcam haha. I'll upgrade it when the time comes if I need to.