Why is no one talking about these Sheriff Country writing issues

So I have waited almost an entire summer chewing the fat on Sheriff Country, and I'm still not sure I'm in love. Do you think I'm missing something? -- My Tech -- Ring Light: http://bit.ly/3J068bb Editing Software: https://bit.ly/4qbJptz Phone: Samsung Galaxy A23 Microphone: https://tinyurl.com/4htpazkb