how i wrote a personal statement oxford called "very impressive" 😛😛

hey guys i wanted to make this video even though it is a bit late sorry mb [better late than never ahh] because in my oxford uni feedback after i got rejected post interview they lowk glazed my personal statement and said it was "very impressive" so i thought i'd give you guys the advice i took and also wish i knew earlier when writing my personal statement to make the process easier, as well as showing you my first and final draft so you can see which bits i changed and why - hope this helps and good luck with your applications 🫶🫶 contact me !! - i do a level tutoring for biology [aqa] and geography [edexcel] instagram: honeylemonn_tea email: nicole.mrj111@gmail.com timestamps: 00:00 advice 12:30 first draft 16:35 final draft current favourites: farmers markets, pibble, cream cheese frosting subscribers: 1485 i hope you have a great day !! nicole 💗 #personalstatement #year13 #university #ucas