The trapping experience on SMP's.....

I would really appreciate a comment on what i could do better! video was alot of work and im really proud of it. My fwends: nyyk_ , Latagg (cartmayhem) 00:00 Gearing up W/ Team 2:40 Building first traps 3:29 Waiting for first Victims 4:38 Dear Freecam users.... 5:25 Legendary 2v2 9:12 Random Fight against Rank 2 11:04 The great escape 11:57 Its not over.... #judelow #trapping #minecraft #smp