Little Pitchers 5 minute Short Film

My twin sister, ‪@traceytelgen‬ , and I put this together in about a month this Spring for a film festival that didn't end up going forward, so I'm uploading here. It's adapted from my One Act play, Little Pitchers, which runs 40 pages. Here with a limited cast of my sister and I, and short film maximum run of 5 minutes. I have saved the originally filmed scenes, and may recut and re-edit to a slightly longer format, but want to post this format and get feedback. So, please do let us know what you think. Credits: Little Pitchers. Written by: Laurie Telgen; Adapted by: Laurie Telgen; Filmed by: Tracey & Laurie Telgen; Directed by: Laurie & Tracey Telgen Set, Props, Costume: Tracey and Laurie Telgen. Cast: Laura: Laurie, Abigail: Tracey. Sound Effects: Twin Bell Alarm Clock Continuous Ringing by cryptidcat -- https://freesound.org/s/743963/ -- License: Creative Commons 0 ; Ambience - Cattle Barn - Busy - 96kHzhg.wav by JarredGibb -- https://freesound.org/s/233268/ -- License: Creative Commons 0 ; old car.wav by leo153 -- https://freesound.org/s/497694/ -- License: Creative Commons 0 ; G13.1-06-Car Crank, Idle, Car Doors.wav by craigsmith -- https://freesound.org/s/438033/ -- License: Creative Commons 0 This will be a series including behind the scenes propmaking, some film technique illustration, bloopers, and a cat-cut.